Sunday, February 17, 2013

Open Prompt #2 Revision

2007, Form B. Works of literature often depict acts of betrayal. Friends and even family may betray a protagonist; main characters may likewise be guilty of treachery or may betray their own values. Select a novel or play that includes such acts of betrayal. Then, in a well-written essay, analyze the nature of the betrayal and show how it contributes to the meaning of the work as a whole.
The Uglies by Scott Westerfeld is a novel set 300 years in the future after the society we know today collapses. A new society forms where kids must undergo an operation that biologically enhances the features of these people to meet a certain standard of beautiful at the age of sixteen. From a young age, these kids are told that they are inadequate until they receive this operation. The protagonist, Tally, contemplates joining her suite mates in the pretty city, or following her friend Shay to the rebel group that is plotting to overthrow the government that forces the operation upon people up in the mountains. 
Unbeknownst to Tally, the government has been trying to locate and exterminate this rebel group for many years now. After discovering that Shay has already started the journey to the mountains, the government jumps on the opportunity to use Tally as a rebel group scout. Although Tally does not want to endanger to friend Shay, she only wants to do what is right. Tally begins her journey to the mountains with a government tracker in hand. Once she makes it to the rebel group, she befriends them, and finds herself unable to turn them over to the government.
Tally is torn. Should she betray her new friends? In this society, a new set of morals and standards about society is set; what is considered beautiful? How much power should government have? What is right or wrong? Tally finds herself conflicted between her own morals and the ones society sets for her. Tally has grown up in a world that tries to defy nature that says that it is wrong to appreciate the way you were made, and that nobody is born beautiful. She sees her quest of betrayal as just her duty to her government.  Once she meets the members of the rebel group, she sees a new perspective on life, and starts to make her own judgments instead of the ones the government forces onto people. Although Tally's betrayal was not intentional, it was a fight against everything she had ever known. It was only Tally's moral compass that brought her to the conclusion of what is right.

Sunday, February 10, 2013

Response to Course Material #6

In class, we finally wrapped up studying Hamlet! While Ms. Holmes was gone, we watched this freaky version of the movie that gave me nightmares. Also, I thought the characters were donating blood when they were actually shooting up heroine, and that made me quite confused.
After Hamlet, we started reading Rosencrantz and Guildenstern are Dead, which is like the untold story of Ros and Guil. After reading Hamlet so many times, I thought I had a good understanding of basically any interpretation of this play, but now we are learning about yet another point of view! I think it is interesting of Stoppard to adopt Shakespeare's line and develop a play around it. Stoppard probably uses the events he writes in his play to support his own theory of Hamlet.  It really makes you conscious of all the characters in the play, and how their lives impact the story of Hamlet as well.

Saturday, January 19, 2013

Prompt Revision #1


     One of the strongest human drives seems to be a desire for power. Write an essay in which you discuss how a character in a novel or a drama struggles to free himself or herself from the power of others or seeks to gain power over others. Be sure to demonstrate in your essay how the author uses this power struggle to enhance the meaning of the work.

          In Jodi Picoult's My Sister's Keeper, the protagonist Anna faces the decision of saving her sister's life or saving herself. Her parents originally only had two children, Anna's sister Kate and her brother Jesse. After Kate was diagnosed with leukemia, her parents need to find someone who was a genetic match to her so they could donate bone marrow and keep Kate alive. We first see the struggle of power develop with Kate when she develops cancer--she loses the control of her own body and her own life by being dependent on someone for her own survival. 
          After finding that no one in the family could provide the blood for Kate, her parents decided to have another baby, only this time they selected genes for the child that would ensure a genetic match for Kate. Almost instantly after Anna is born, transfusions begin. Right from the start, Anna has to sacrifice herself for the sake of her sister. 
          Years of painful treatment pass and Anna continues to supply Kate, often having to miss school, losing friends along the way. Seemingly, Anna has had enough of the treatments, and the book begins with Anna asking a lawyer for the rights to her own body over her parents. 
         The story continues with the fight over the custody of Anna's body between Anna and her parents. Anna is trying to free herself from the control of her parents, and argues that she doesn't need to put up with the transplants and longer. She is losing everything and is left with  a family that seems to only care about Kate's survival rather than hers and as a last resort, Anna sues her parents for the rights to her own body.  Anna's mom decides to defend herself in the court case, which causes a divide in the family. 
         As the story goes on, we eventually see that Anna was not selfishly trying to save herself from the pain and her sacrifices, but instead her sister's. Kate had already tried to commit suicide because she was tired of living in such a helpless way, and when a vital kidney transplant was required, Kate made Anna promise to just let her be, which is why Anna began fighting in the first place. Kate wanted the power to choose death herself instead of relying on her sister for everything. 
         In this novel, we see boundaries of ethics stretch and the simultaneous struggles over power. Anna is the result of a genetic enhancement. Is it right to choose what traits your child will have? Essentially, Anna's existence is because of Kate. Is it right for Anna to have to endure these treatments, even if it is to save Kate? When is saving a child's life wrong? This novel transcends the plot by evoking these types of ethical dilemmas in the reader's mind. The struggle for power illustrated here may have readers reconsider what is right and what is wrong. 

Thursday, January 17, 2013

Hamlet


Author: William Shakespeare

Setting: Denmark

Plot:  The play begins with Horatio, one of Hamlet’s friends, and some guards of the castle seeing the Ghost of Hamlet’s late father.  Claudius, Hamlet’s uncle, has just taken over the throne and married Hamlet’s mother, Gertrude.  Horatio tells Hamlet that he has seen the ghost of his father, and Hamlet decides that he wants to see for himself.  During the middle of the night, Hamlet meets the Ghost, who addresses him directly and tells him that he was killed by his own brother who is now married to his wife.  The Ghost also tells Hamlet that he needs to take revenge on Claudius by killing him and getting the throne.  Gertrude and Claudius get some of Hamlet’s school friends, Rosencrantz and Guildenstern to spy on him.  Meanwhile, Hamlet’s old girlfriend Ophelia feels like Hamlet doesn’t actually love her anymore.  With her father Polonius and Claudius spying on their conversation, Hamlet and Ophelia talk and Hamlet tells her to go to a nunnery and confessed that once he did love her, but not anymore.  At this point, most people start to see that Hamlet is crazy (or is he really?), but he is just trying to avenge his late father.  When Hamlet meets the players, he gets an idea that will help him discover if Claudius is truly guilty of murder.  He tells the Players to reenact the murder and the quick marriage to Gertrude, which they do.  During the play, Claudius gets very upset and leaves, which lets Hamlet know that he did murder Old Hamlet. Hamlet decides that he does need to kill Claudius, but when he goes to do the deed, he finds him praying and therefore cannot kill him or his soul would go to heaven.  He then decides to go talk to his mother Gertrude about what is going on.  During their conversation, he sees something moving behind a curtain, and, believing that it is Claudius spying, kills the figure.  Rather than Claudius, Hamlet finds that he has just murdered Polonius, Ophelia’s father.  In the middle of their talk, Hamlet sees the Ghost and tries to show his mother, but she can’t see it.  This is another indication that he is clearly going mad.  Hamlet is banished to England, where Rosencrantz and Guildenstern will deliver a letter to the King telling him to have Hamlet killed.  Hamlet discovers what is written in the letter and exchanges it for one telling the King to have the messengers killed.  Ophelia drowns because she is so upset with her father’s death and Hamlet’s state of mind.  Laertes, her brother, finds out what has happened to his sister and father and plans to kill Hamlet.  The two begin to battle, and Hamlet is cut by Laertes’ poisoned sword.  Before dying, Laertes tells Hamlet that Claudius poisoned the cup that Gertrude has just taken a drink from, and she dies as well.  Now furious, Hamlet stabs Claudius with the poisoned sword and kills him.  Hamlet’s friend Horatio declares that he will now kill himself, but Hamlet stops him and makes one last request.  He wants Fortinbras, the Norwegian prince to take over the kingdom after he dies.  

Characters:
Hamlet - After losing his father, Hamlet goes mad with the desire to get revenge on Claudius.  Though his motives seem reasonable, he does not handle the situation as he could have, and ends up dying as a result of his poor decisions.  He also struggles to take action throughout the play rather than simply talking about his plans.  
Claudius - Claudius is obsessed with keeping his position as the new King of Denmark.  He is willing to kill is brother to get the crown and later we find out that although he does not want to directly kill Hamlet, recruits Laertes to do the deed.  We question how much he actually loves Gertrude.  
Gertrude - After marrying Claudius, Gertrude struggles to find the balance between her new husband and her son.  She urges Hamlet to stay in Denmark after he says he will go back to school, but then sides with Claudius later in the story.  
Ophelia - When Hamlet goes mad, she is caught in the middle and ends up turning on him and not helping him when he needed it the most.  Polonius’ death triggers her to go mad as well and drowns in the river.  

Narrative Tone/Style and Theme:
Like all plays, the story is told from an outside point of view and can see different characters at different times.  By doing this, we as the audience can get a better idea of each characters’ intentions and motives since we know what they are really thinking and don’t have to rely on a narrator.  The serious tone of the play shows the audience the severity of the situation Hamlet is placed in.  Many key conflicts help to develop the story.  Hamlet struggles to actually take action after he has talked about it and knows what he wants to do.  Throughout the play, Hamlet has numerous lengthy monologues, which strengthens his conflicted state.  Some clear images are presented to us when we see the Ghost for the first time and get an idea about what occurred in the story.  

Theme: The only way to cure the rotten core of Denmark is to start fresh and kill all those in power who remain.  

Quotes:
Hamlet - “now he is praying / And now I'll do't. And so he goes to heaven; / And so am I revenged. That would be scann'd: / A villain kills my father; and for that, / I, his sole son, do this same villain send / To heaven.”
When Hamlet decides to kill Claudius, he finds him praying.  He soon realizes that if he were to kill him now, his soul would go to heaven and his father’s death would not be revenged.  
Gertrude - “Seek for thy noble father in the dust: / Thou know'st 'tis common; all that lives must die, / Passing through nature to eternity.”
Everyone who is close to Hamlet, including his mother, is telling him to get over his father’s death very quickly.  His mother has clearly been content with the late Hamlet’s death, as she remarries very shortly after the death.  

Sunday, January 13, 2013

Response to Course Material #5

In class, we've been doing an extensive analysis of Hamlet. Very extensiveAfter reading the text, we had the wonderful privilege of annotating for hours and hours on end which was lots of fun. Then we got to review Hamlet even more by watching several films to see the interpretations of this play under the direction of different directors. I will admit that reviewing Hamlet so many times has helped me understand where these different opinions stem from. The multitude of interpretations is clear evidence of how Shakespeare has been coined one of the greatest writers of all time--his work is applicable on so many levels to so many kinds of people. But getting to know the play so well also frustrates me. Some events in the play seem so unnecessary and ridiculous, like Hamlet's reasoning that he is always right about everything. He justifies killing people, and seems to think that he can get away with anything. I just wonder why the people Denmark love him so much even though he so arrogant and egotistic.

Besides Hamlet, I've been freaking out about finals. I thought the terms test retake would be the end of it all, but of course, it's not. We get to prove our incompetence with English vocab yet again on the final, where it impacts our grade twice as much. Should be a fun time studying for it.


Sunday, December 16, 2012

Closed Reading #4

Sunday, December 9, 2012

Open Prompt #4



1982. In great literature, no scene of violence exists for its own sake. Choose a work of literary merit that confronts the reader or audience with a scene or scenes of violence. In a well-organized essay, explain how the scene or scenes contribute to the meaning of the complete work. Avoid plot summary.

In Anthony Burgess' A Clockwork Orange, violence is a very normal part of the characters' society. The story takes place in a fictionalized future where kids are increasingly more prone to violent acts. Alex, the protagonist, leads a gang in his town that either fights other gangs, beats up the men or rapes the women in his community. To pass the time when they are not committing these crimes, the group hangs out at local bars.

I think Burgess implements the theme of violence in society's youth in this story because it shows the change in how people were bringing up their children. Burgess may have noticed, in his own community, a leniency toward older values and how strictly people tended to be toward their kids. Perhaps Burgess was trying to warn others of this loosening of morals through a satirical way in A Clockwork Orange. By showing a group of 15 years old wreaking havoc throughout town and committing almost unfathomable crimes, I think Burgess' point is more shocking to its readers (also, consider the time period that this book was written in. Society was not as exposed to violence as it is today).  


Another use of Burgess' scenes of violence is the idea of a lack of self discipline and empowerment. Perhaps Burgess is trying to suggest that he is noticing that people feel that they are only powerful when putting down others. Alex, in the story, describes a rush he gets when committing these crimes, and how he feels untouchable. By scaring his audience by showing them the lengths that people will go to to feel better about themselves, I think Burgess hopes to show his audience that the greatest satisfaction should only come from believing in yourself, not from the expense of others.
Burgess also is trying to stress how short term satisfaction is no substitute for long term satisfaction. Although Alex may feel a high from these acts of violence, hours later, he is down again, resulting in more crimes. I think Burgess wants people to achieve a long term happiness, and to accomplish something bigger.  
Burgess uses scenes of violence as a method of satire to show his society the results of poor discipline in both our youth and ourselves. 

Monday, December 3, 2012

Death of a Salesman

Author: Arthur Miller
Setting: New York, 1940s. 
Significant Characters:
  • Willy Loman- a salesman with a career in decline, a complicated relationship with his son Biff, and an unstable mental state.
  • Linda Loman- Willy's wife, who wants their sons to just go along with his illness, and doesn't do anything significant about his suicide attempts because of his pride.
  • Biff Loman- Willy's older son, who rejected Willy's values of popularity and money in order to move out west, and has been living with the secret of his father's infidelity for many years.
  • Happy Loman- Willy's younger son, who always seems to be trying to get on his father's good side. In the end, it seems that he will follow in Willy's path.

Summery/Plot: This play starts out with Willy Loman coming home from work to his home and wife, Linda, in New York. His two sons, Biff and Happy, are in town visiting. Willy and Linda discuss his job, which Willy has to drive far away to. Linda wants Willy to relocate his job to the city because he is old and shouldn't have to drive that far. His two sons come down and talk to Willy, and then Willy has one of his daydreams, older memories he has that are most likely twisted to his liking. The daydream is about the family playing ball in the backyard, and Willy's reveal of his new business idea. Bernard, the Loman's neighbor, is also there, and stresses the importance of school and Biff's grades. Linda enters as well, and talks about the expenses the family will have to pay off, and how Willy's pay doesn't cover for them. Willy has another delusion with this daydream, flashing back to an affair he had in Boston.
The scene flashes back to reality. The family is discussing Willy's mental state. The boys can see the evident psychological problems Willy is dealing with, but Linda continues to defend Willy, denying that there is anything wrong with him. After much arguing, they argee to go into business together.
The next day, Willy is heading off to work to ask his boss to relocate his job. Afterwards, Linda tells him that his sons are going to treat him for dinner. So Willy goes to his boss, only to find out that he is fired. Willy, now unemployed, goes to Charley, his neighbor, to ask for more money, an activity he engages in weekly. He finds out that his son, Bernard, is going to argue a case in front of the supreme court. Bernard and Willy discuss Biff's past, and how he flunked high school.
Later, Willy arrives at the restaurant  expecting his sons to treat him to dinner, and expecting Biff is have started the business they were previously discussing. Biff, however, had not pulled off the deal, and the family argues. Eventually, the two sons leave with women from the restaurant and leave Willy by himself in the bathroom.
In the bathroom, Willy flashes back to when he had the affair in Boston. Biff finds out about the affair, thus deterring him from enrolling in summer school and stopping his graduation. This is why Biff is such a "bum" now. Willy snaps out of his dream, and goes back home to his family.
The family has a long series of confessions after that, and make amends about their years of quarreling  Willy, finally content with his life, commits suicide in attempt to help his family financially with his life insurance.


Narrative Voice/Style:
The narrative voice is mostly from Willy's perspective, and the frequent time shifts serve to imply to the audience how muddled Willy's mind is, giving the play a stream of consciousness feel. Symbolism is used by Miller to emphasize important points in the play, such as his use of seeds. His failed attempts to grow vegetables can also be seen as a failed attempt to achieve the American Dream the way he sees it, and his failure to help Biff do the same. The imagery of Willy and the rubber hose also contributes to the story, because the reader picturing the end result of the American Dream as an old man hanging dead in the basement makes it clear that Willy's values don't make for a fulfilling way to live.

Quotes:
"I'm vital in New England." ~ this is an example of how Willy constantly tries to pretend that he's more important than he actually is.
"Pop! I'm a dime a dozen, and so are you!" ~ Biff realizes his father's ideas of grandeur are impractical, and tries to tell him that. This quote is central in the message Miller is trying to show in the play.

Theme:
Miller's Death of a Salesman shows that superficial values make for an empty American Dream. The title, which speaks of Willy's eventual suicide, supports this because it could also be construed to mean the death of Willy's personification of a dream based on emptiness. Willy's juxtaposition with Biff also supports this, because Biff is the opposite of Willy, and shows how insignificant Willy's life choices are.

Sunday, December 2, 2012

Response to Course Material #4

In class, we've been analyzing Death of a Salesman more. Like before, I think the class discussions about DOS is very helpful is helping me see what the author, Miller, was trying to portray, and how other people in the class interpret the play.
We've also been reading Hamlet, which has been better than a lot of other experiences I've had reading Shakespeare. Ms. Holmes' input is very helpful and helps me understand the strange Old English dialect, and its been much easier to stay interested in the story. What is interesting to me is how different Shakespearean plays are compared to our modern plays. For example, deaths are somewhat taboo in Shakepeare's time, whereas today, we can see death in any episode of CSI or Criminal Minds during prime time on TV. Polonius' death in Hamlet was a complete shock to an audience back then, but now we think almost nothing of it. Other deaths in Shakespearean plays have been announced off stage with characters saying things like "Oh no, I'm dead!" which sounds ridiculous to us now.  Over the centuries, people have become desensitized to violence, among several other things. Like in Death of a Salesman, Biff was unaware of affairs, and children during the 1950s were generally more innocent.  Kids these days just seem to know more, and the social norm has changed.
In Hamlet, long soliloquies and monologues are used frequently in plot development. In modern times, a story line is told through actions and character interactions, rather than through an explanation of one character. It's weird that someone has to stand in front of an audience and have to explain what is happening, especially since lit teachers have been drilling us since middle school to "show, not tell" in our writings. 
Other than that, we had our last student group of the rhetoric exercises, which is pretty sad. Instead, we practice different literary tones before each class as a warm-up, which has been fun, because Ms. Holmes gives out jolly ranchers, and it makes me happy.

Sunday, November 18, 2012

Close Reading #3

Hipsters are constantly trying to evade what is thought of as "mainstream." Christy Wampole's article How to Live Without Irony addresses what she thinks may be the origination and effects of the hipster.
To start off, Wampole describes where we may be able to spot a hipster. She explains that they are lurking predominately in big cities, but are most likely present all around the world, even in small towns. She then goes on to explain common hipster attire and mannerisms such as "outmoded fashions (the mustache, the tiny shorts), mechanisms (fixed-gear bicycles, portable record players) and hobbies (home brewing, playing trombone)."  I think Wampole starts off her article with this imagery because it is relatable to her readers, creating connections that people can draw about certain hipster-like individuals in their own lives.  
Throughout the article, Wampole uses an elevated sort of language, though not quite as formal as epics may be, but more formal than any type of day-to-day language we use to communicate casually. Wampole uses words like "preemptively," "disseminated," "contemptibly," and "existential malaise" to illustrate her point. This actually may be a use of the idea of irony in her article to use words that are not as popular in the English language. Using a word like "hipster" in her article, a more commonly used term, actually draws more attention to the idea of a hipster because of the contrast to the rest of the article. 
Wampole also has many broken sentences in her article. As I am reading it, there are several sentences where it sounds like Wampole is almost interrupting herself with her own ideas, much like how someone would talk. The syntax is a bit strange because as I mentioned before, the language is quite elevated, but perhaps Wampole just talks like this all the time. This makes me think that Wampole may be in fact a hipster herself. 
Wampole implements these rhetoric strategies to help make the point that even though the hipster may be frowned upon in our society, there is actually a little bit of hipster in all of us.  Everyone strives to be different and to stand out in some way, and Wampole wants people to know that there is absolutely nothing wrong with that.

http://opinionator.blogs.nytimes.com/2012/11/17/how-to-live-without-irony/?ref=opinion

Saturday, November 10, 2012

Open Prompt #3



1976. The conflict created when the will of an individual opposes the will of the majority is the recurring theme of many novels, plays, and essays. Select the work of an essayist who is in opposition to his or her society; or from a work of recognized literary merit, select a fictional character who is in opposition to his or her society. In a critical essay, analyze the conflict and discuss the moral and ethical implications for both the individual and the society. Do not summarize the plot or action of the work you choose.

In George Orwell's 1984  the main character, Winston Smith, is constantly striving to oppose the majority. In his society, Oceania, the government has the ultimate say--they dictate his history, actions, and even his thoughts. The government, also knows as the Party, prohibits free thought or any expression of individuality. Winston decides to join the Brotherhood, a rebel that wants to overthrow the Party, in hopes of fighting their oppression.

From Winston's point of view, the society that he lives in has no right to control his life. He meets a beautiful woman, Julia, at the Ministry of Truth, where he works, and falls in love. However, it is illegal to love in Oceania, and the two must continue their affair in secret. He knows he is taking a risk by seeing Julia, so he decides to start a journal to record his thoughts, just in case he taken away by the police, in hopes that he may share them one day to inspire others to join the fight against the Party. Winston's happiness is limited by having to keep his relationship a secret, and bottling his opinions and emotions toward the government. He believes that the Party is not entitled to directing his opinions and his right to happiness.

The Party, on the other hand, stands by their actions. They believe what they are doing is right. They have changed Oceania's past by telling their citizens what other countries they are at war with, and altered their history records to fit their needs. The start of all conflict is a difference of opinions, they say, and by unifying and implementing only one "right" opinion, they have eliminated conflict, and ultimately brought about world peace. By controlling society down to the individuals' thought, the Party believes they are creating a better place.

Saturday, November 3, 2012

Response to Course Material 3

In class, we watched the Death of a Salesman instead of reading it, like The American Dream. I think this was a good choice, because the American Dream is much easier to envision by just reading, unlike Death of a Salesman. DOS involves ghosts and hallucinations, and several scene changes that I wouldn't have understood by just solely reading the play. Like earlier with the American Dream, I don't really understand what's happening yet, so I hope the class discussions next week can help me out.

Also, we had the terms test re-take, but I didn't feel like studying, so I just took the first grade that I got. Probably an early case of senioritis.

For the blog posts, the more we do, the less I have to talk about. For instance, with the open prompts, I am actually running out of literature to reference. I have a very limited number of books to choose from, which is a problem. Half the books I've read aren't even applicable to the prompts, and the other half is pop fiction, which is apparently not ok to use anymore. In middle school, I remember reading a new book every night, but ever since high school started, all I've wanted to do after doing homework for hours is sleep. I guess I miss reading for fun, but who has the time? So next open prompts for the rest of the year are going to be a struggle.

Besides the blog posts and the movie, we've also held student-led exercises that help us with DIDLS. These discussions are a fun way to implement what we've learned about the rhetoric. I think that interactive class activities help engage students in the learning process.